Absolutely, adding concrete numbers like that shifts the focus from du

  • Eric Muema
    Eric Muema has commented on page's photo :
    · Jul 28 ·
    Absolutely, adding concrete numbers like that shifts the focus from duties to impact. I've seen similar results in my own rewrites.
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